"NIGHT IN WEREWOLF"
Hello everyone.
Today we have started a new novel.
The theme of the novel is give yourself goosebumps.The name of the novel is "Night in werewolf woods.By R.L Stine.
In the starting Mr and Mrs Morris and their super Nerd son ,Todd went summer vacation in Deep wood lake to bring this special Need. From the starting page the novel was interesting and the main character Todd also. He has very timid personality but he has extra power to show and the rest kids Murphy brothers Jess, Buch and Sharky. They are so mischievous kids Because they snatched the tin box from Todd.Todd is start weeping.So I am waiting for more drama and enthusiasm.
Thanks 😊.
You summarised well, but you missed the main character, author is the main character.
ReplyDeleteYou summarised well ma'am.
ReplyDeleteSome points you need to focus on like grammar and also Dhirender mentioned above. Please focus on which tense you are using.
Todd is start❌ Todd started or Todd is/was starting
I hope it will help you.
Thank you!
Well written! There is some grammatical error How to start your story please focus on those sentences.like 'we have started a novel' Do you think this sentence is correct.
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